Friday, February 4, 2011

Moonie


Hey ladies, sorry I haven't been posting, been really busy working on my comics. This drawing is done for my cover, and before I finish it (add shades so it's not quite so black and blobby) I was wondering if I could get some critique particularly on anatomy.... thnks!

1 comment:

Cheyenne said...

hey! cool design! So for the anatomy, watch out for her ribcage/chest, you see how her face and legs are turned towards the left, but her ribcage is facing forward..it should be following the line of the body, and also facing left. It will make her legs line up better with her midriff and head.

Also be careful of her left hand, it gets lost within the hair and wing, it should be a clearer silhouette.

hopes this helps!